production: friends review

 We worked together to create the movie and then showed it to a buddy to receive some feedback. We sought an outsider's viewpoint on the movie, someone who wasn't engaged in its creation. We had confidence that our friends would be forthright with us and express their true opinions.

I was a little anxious as we sat down to see the movie with our friend. Even though the same buddy saw my video the year before, I often get anxious in circumstances like these. I had high hopes for the project because we had put a lot of effort into it. While we waited for our friends, we all sat on the couch and watched the movie on the TV.

Our acquaintance sat in quiet for a short while after the movie concluded as they contemplated what they had just seen. They finally turned to us and began to express their ideas. They were candid yet helpful, highlighting both the movie's advantages and disadvantages.

Our acquaintance thought certain sections were nicely done and truly loved them, but they also felt that some sections needed work. They provided us with some advice on how we might improve some sections, including adding additional conversation to specific (mall interaction) situations or tweaking the story's flow (changing ordering and taking out flashbacks).

We then decided that we should have an editing day to tweak this things. 








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